I've been waiting for the scene for a while, especially after the false start kiss on the docks. You definitely delivered, Dyce!Anon! I think all of the buildup made this even more potent.

Btw, is the horker fat misfire going to be canon with this? I admit I was terribly confused when the fic started. Sorry, it's a bit off topic, but it's been bugging me the whole time!

Loved the inclusion of the title Stormcock! You know what your audience craves. =D