Sorry, but I really couldn't make a three way relationship work. I'm not comfortable with something like that myself (smut is okay all ways, but in relationships I'm very conservative) and thus couldn't write it convincingly, even though I've tried.
I'm not really happy with it cause it's too sugary, but to be honest, I just wanted to get it done. Chapter 1 was fun but Chap 2 really wasn't... I hope it still turned out okay, somehow.