Madanach's really quite sweet for a guy who hangs deserters by their entrails (or something like that). :)
I think this is my favorite section so far. You very much succeeded in showing that Liriel is a badass, and the mortal/incrediblylonglivedelf dynamic, which could easily have been cliched, was genuinely moving.
Re: Nightshade and Juniper 7.9
I think this is my favorite section so far. You very much succeeded in showing that Liriel is a badass, and the mortal/incrediblylonglivedelf dynamic, which could easily have been cliched, was genuinely moving.