Wow a!a. This is very well written and painful and a pretty accurate fleshing out of what's implied in the game, I think. I especially love the first part. But you know what the best/worst/most brilliant thing is? You gave Elenwen one of Ulfric's lines. Every time he shouts "You call yourself a warrior?" my heart is going to shatter now. That's heartbreaking beyond words, that she carved that into him so brutally that he spits it back at people when he's fighting. I can't wait to see what you do with the last part.