Thanks for the advice! I'll try to consider these things the next time I write. Your suggestion and tips seem like they could make fleshing out both the personality and the smut a lot easier.
I may try using these comment to improve this fill like you said, it seems like a good idea to me :) If so, should I re-post them here, or as a new thing altogether?
Re: Author's notes
Date: 2013-06-03 03:27 pm (UTC)I may try using these comment to improve this fill like you said, it seems like a good idea to me :) If so, should I re-post them here, or as a new thing altogether?