I really did like your fic Anon, and I hope you do continue writing. Like anything else, writing only improves with practice and repetition. Keep it up and you'll be a great writer - you've got potential, you just need to work on it.
Finding a beta reader might be a good idea, that way you'll get feedback and advice on grammar, spelling generally, and if the reader is within the fandom they'll be able to offer advice on keeping things in-character. It always pays to have another person cast their eye over something, just for tweaking and finishing touches, anyway. (Although I'm one to talk, never use one myself^^)
I get where you're coming from with leaving the Dwemer instruction in - I've done the same with my fics, realising after I've posted that some bits didn't need to be in there. I usually edit it when I'm reposting de-anon on my fic journal.
The best thing about smut is that everyone's tastes are different, and if you write what you find sexy, you'll find plenty of people who find the same thing sexy, too - but getting past the inhibitions can be tricky. Again, the more you do it the easier it gets :D
I really hope you write more fics with Kathryn, maybe just write a little character piece (for yourself) so you know what she's like, and if you're writing another fic with her you'll know how she'd think/act/react in whatever situation she's in.
Anon again
Finding a beta reader might be a good idea, that way you'll get feedback and advice on grammar, spelling generally, and if the reader is within the fandom they'll be able to offer advice on keeping things in-character. It always pays to have another person cast their eye over something, just for tweaking and finishing touches, anyway. (Although I'm one to talk, never use one myself^^)
I get where you're coming from with leaving the Dwemer instruction in - I've done the same with my fics, realising after I've posted that some bits didn't need to be in there. I usually edit it when I'm reposting de-anon on my fic journal.
The best thing about smut is that everyone's tastes are different, and if you write what you find sexy, you'll find plenty of people who find the same thing sexy, too - but getting past the inhibitions can be tricky. Again, the more you do it the easier it gets :D
I really hope you write more fics with Kathryn, maybe just write a little character piece (for yourself) so you know what she's like, and if you're writing another fic with her you'll know how she'd think/act/react in whatever situation she's in.