I liked the politics and plots, but I also like seeing more emphasis on characters. I'm really looking forward to seeing how Ulfric and Audric interact and grow closer. I'm wondering if things will continue to look better in the Gray Quarter, or if Ulfric is inclined to let it fall by the wayside again. I really liked your description of the Gray Quarter and how it's changed, and I love Ambarys in general. In other words, keep it up! I really enjoy reading this story.