Omg omg an update!! :D You made me so happy!! I'm sorry I didn't comment on the last update for part 11. The imagery and description for the scene by the lake in 12b was fantastic. I could totally picture the place and Audric and Brynjolf's interactions. Great characterization, as usual. Brynjolf seems unbothered that Audric might love someone else, even encourages him, yet at the same time presents Audric with a special gift... it tugs on my heartstrings a bit!
Also, things are becoming more tense between Ulfric and Audric... I find it interesting how Audric is rude and impatient with Ulfric, almost as if expecting the other man would reject him and Audric is trying to protect himself from that. I really liked the following part: “I am not your puzzle,” he said, squeezing Ulfric’s shoulder, “and I am nobody’s prize.”
Eagerly awaiting the next installation!! I love how much time and energy you've put into making this fill lengthy and elaborate. :)
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Re: "Divide and Conquer" Ulfric Stormcloak/M!DB, 12d/??
Date: 2014-04-08 06:02 am (UTC)Also, things are becoming more tense between Ulfric and Audric... I find it interesting how Audric is rude and impatient with Ulfric, almost as if expecting the other man would reject him and Audric is trying to protect himself from that. I really liked the following part: “I am not your puzzle,” he said, squeezing Ulfric’s shoulder, “and I am nobody’s prize.”
Eagerly awaiting the next installation!! I love how much time and energy you've put into making this fill lengthy and elaborate. :)