Now, I have to believe, my dear Dyce!Anon that you've been in relationships with this personality type was well, because you were just too dead on when it came to the sex. The 'bossy bottom', oh, I know all about that. Just this weekend I looked at my husband and thought 'You don't have a toppy bone in your body' but he manages to be pretty insistent that I dom him. That 'I demand that you make me beg' thing is so messed up, and yet, you completely got it.
I loved how you played on Vilkas's physical beauty, because the man *is*a work of art. I also appreciate that you didn't go with the olfactory kink, because frankly, it's a little tired at this point. Points to you on the 'first thing in the morning' aspect of it, as well as the little tiny point that Vilkas's beast blood means that he didn't sleep most of the night while Dyce was out.
Simply put, this exceeded all my expectations. And my expectations were not low. It was all I could have hoped for: true to the characters, true to the sex, funny, touching, and mechanically excellent. (Pacing, flow, tone, etc) I have already used the insights on Farkas I developed from the first half of the story in at least two reviews over at the other place, and I know I'll be basing much of my thinking about Vilkas on this as well. You changed my headspace, and I honestly don't have a better compliment that I can give.
So, finally, Thank You. You have honored me and my request by producing something that is absolutely beautiful. I am humbled and grateful.
OP rides again! (2/2)
I loved how you played on Vilkas's physical beauty, because the man *is*a work of art. I also appreciate that you didn't go with the olfactory kink, because frankly, it's a little tired at this point. Points to you on the 'first thing in the morning' aspect of it, as well as the little tiny point that Vilkas's beast blood means that he didn't sleep most of the night while Dyce was out.
Simply put, this exceeded all my expectations. And my expectations were not low. It was all I could have hoped for: true to the characters, true to the sex, funny, touching, and mechanically excellent. (Pacing, flow, tone, etc) I have already used the insights on Farkas I developed from the first half of the story in at least two reviews over at the other place, and I know I'll be basing much of my thinking about Vilkas on this as well. You changed my headspace, and I honestly don't have a better compliment that I can give.
So, finally, Thank You. You have honored me and my request by producing something that is absolutely beautiful. I am humbled and grateful.