Fave line: Ralof tried not to smile, because he knew it would only make things worse, but he found it funny how Lendri seemed to forget Nordic grammar whenever he got really angry. "I'm sorry. Hey, at least I didn't yell victory or Sovngarde."
Aw, I'm sorry it's finished, this was so much fun!
I hope you do do that little epilogue - Ralof could use some lessons :)
Re: Part 2 (finally continued)
Fave line: Ralof tried not to smile, because he knew it would only make things worse, but he found it funny how Lendri seemed to forget Nordic grammar whenever he got really angry. "I'm sorry. Hey, at least I didn't yell victory or Sovngarde."
Aw, I'm sorry it's finished, this was so much fun!
I hope you do do that little epilogue - Ralof could use some lessons :)