Oh my, deliciously well-done there A!A - you've made this OP bite her lip in absolute delight all the way through my dear. ;)
I love how you've included the hint of Lendri's nortorious cannibalistic nature of his kind, along with the sex-appeal tongue piercing yum! I also seriously enjoyed how you've written Teldryn's thoughts during the whole scenario. You really have done marvellously well sweet A!A.
Looking forward to the next part!~

>Sorry for the much late reply. ^^;