O.O Nice inclusion of the song lines, feels like that fits perfectly.
The battle isn't bad as it is. It makes more sense than being drawn out; the girl wants her revenge, she's leagues ahead of him, and she isn't going to draw out the moment! She wants the man dead, dammit!
I have a hankering to write Skyrim/Frozen myself, but haven't found a topic yet. Now I want to write a crossover even more.
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Re: Queen of the Frost - 2/2 Passing!Anon
Date: 2014-02-28 10:59 pm (UTC)The battle isn't bad as it is. It makes more sense than being drawn out; the girl wants her revenge, she's leagues ahead of him, and she isn't going to draw out the moment! She wants the man dead, dammit!
I have a hankering to write Skyrim/Frozen myself, but haven't found a topic yet. Now I want to write a crossover even more.