I was planning on having Aela use that to stop the machine but couldn't find the actual word for stop anywhere and didn't want to get it wrong or make it up to have someone come and correct me so I thought I would just leave it in there.. :L I understand that I didn't really mention Kat's character and I'll be sure to work on that for next time
I agree about the smut. It's hard to write and I therefore had trouble making it last very long, but I also found it a lot of fun!
Thanks for all the complements mixed in as well! The first reply didn't and it kind of knocked my confidence and made me not want to write anymore but your post has made me feel much better, so thanks! I'll look for another prompt to practice on :)
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Date: 2013-06-03 03:18 pm (UTC)I was planning on having Aela use that to stop the machine but couldn't find the actual word for stop anywhere and didn't want to get it wrong or make it up to have someone come and correct me so I thought I would just leave it in there.. :L
I understand that I didn't really mention Kat's character and I'll be sure to work on that for next time
I agree about the smut. It's hard to write and I therefore had trouble making it last very long, but I also found it a lot of fun!
Thanks for all the complements mixed in as well! The first reply didn't and it kind of knocked my confidence and made me not want to write anymore but your post has made me feel much better, so thanks! I'll look for another prompt to practice on :)