A!A, you truly are a rare gem. I am constantly amazed at your writing style, and I love how you paint each scene and interaction with no nonsense bulky words - your style is smooth and simple, but very elegant, and suggests you are no stranger to writing. I'm guessing you've been doing this for quite a while!
It reminds me of something Stephen King wrote in his book On Writing. I have a terrible memory, so don't quote me on this, but he said something along the lines of keeping a story simple, so that it flows, and to express what the characters are doing by actions instead of just telling the reader, this happened, that happened, etc. You're doing all those things and more!
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Re: “The Spring Wind That Blew Through Dragonsreach” F!OC/Farengar Secret-Fire, 6g/?
Date: 2013-10-16 12:06 pm (UTC)It reminds me of something Stephen King wrote in his book On Writing. I have a terrible memory, so don't quote me on this, but he said something along the lines of keeping a story simple, so that it flows, and to express what the characters are doing by actions instead of just telling the reader, this happened, that happened, etc. You're doing all those things and more!