Meme Announcements!

[skyrimkinkmeme]

ANNOUNCEMENTS: UPDATED 12/16/2017

Happy Holidays, fellow Kinkmemers! I have returned and have no reasonable excuse for my absence except LIFE. I will be working on updating the archives. If anyone sees anything amiss, please let me know.

I am also hoping to find another Mod and an Archivist.

The more dedicated people we have in this Meme the less chance of it dying. I admit that being the sole keeper of the Meme is not great for the fandom. If something were to happen to me, for good, this place would go the way of the Fallout Kink Meme. Let's not let that happen! If anyone would be interested in Modding/Archiving, please drop me a line. Thanks! <3

Comments

Re: Author's notes

[(Anonymous)]

It was pretty alright for it being your first fill. The "juicy" parts were a bit fast for my tastes, but y'know whatever. I didn't really enjoy Kathryn as a character, she was really flat and didn't have real distinct personality to her, the way she described herself was very arrogant, very out of place, and the fact that her many scars didn't detract from her beauty reminded me of a Mary Sue. I realize Skyrim is a bit of a rough terrain and if you can't lift up a sword, you're pretty much dead, but still a lot of scars can be distracting to a lover, or a turn on if they're into that. I realize this meant to be an erotic story, but that doesn't mean you can't have well-written plot or characters along with your smut. So you should definitely work on your characters, because I would find that more appealing. And I'm sure I am not the only person who would think so. You have a bit of an issue with grammar and such, because you didn't capitalize quite a few words, and I find that distracting because I'm writer myself. So you may want to get an editor or a beta-reader, so you can get feedback before you submit your stories. So I recommend: try to make the smutty parts longer and more detailed, work on your character's personalities, and work on your grammar. So that's about it, but overall it was pretty okay. It wasn't the greatest I've read, of course, but maybe I'll be reading more of your fills in the future. Have a nice day!

Re: Author's notes

[(Anonymous)]

A!A here.
Thanks for the advice.
I fully understand that the smut was a bit short. I read over it again fully once it was posted and realised this myself. It seemed longer when I was writing it :/ I shall work on this for next time.
The characters personalities: Yeah, I see where you're coming from. Re-reading it with your comment in mind I can see that I didn't even mention her personality. Oops.. What is a 'Mary Sue'? I looked it up and from what I understand it is a character that is too perfect? Is that what you meant?
Finally, the grammar. I missed tha capital N in Nord and I wasn't sure if dwarven had a capital 'D'? Is that it or is there more that I didn't realise..
Thanks again for helping me along here. Hopefully my writing will improve into more enjoyable stories for you guys :)