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A different type of Dwemer machinery. 1a / 3

[(Anonymous)]

Okay, so as this is my first ever fill, constructive criticism is welcome.
I apologise for the unimaginative title but I was impatient to get my fill posted so couldn't really be bothered with thinking up a good one. Finally, thanks in advance for reading!

Kathryn looked around. Several destroyed dwarven spiders lay at her feet. The ancient devices proved to be little challenge for the agile Breton, whose arrows tore through the metal as if it were but a sweet roll. In closer combat, she was more than capable with a blade, and found that the mechanical spiders could take no more than two hits each before falling apart at the hinges.

She caught a glimpse of herself in the shining reflection of a metal door down the hall. Her tanned, brown skin had many scars and cuts from the thousands of conflicts she had been engaged in - but this did not detract from her beauty. No, it made her look experienced, like she could take care of herself in a fight. She had a relatively small, dainty body, but with toned, strong muscles. Her long, wavy, dark brown hair fell just past her shoulders. She had full lips, beautiful hazel eyes and pearl white teeth. Many men had fallen for her, and the lucky ones knew that she had full perky breasts and a nice, tight behind.

A different type of Dwemer machinery. 1b / 3

[(Anonymous)]

She was walking through the spider wreckages, kicking the metal pieces around, collecting her arrows when something else caught her eye. Something gleamed among the rocks, the typical golden shine of Dwemer metal. Kathryn, like most Bretons, was an able mage, and she cast magelight in the direction of the source, revealing a polished lever. She momentarily considered leaving, as she had already found the stone of barenziah that was rumoured to have been lost down in the cave, but she knew from experience that powerfully enchanted weapons and armour were often found in the many nooks-and-crannies of Skyrim, hidden from the less perceptive of adventurers. She approached the lever, pulling it with one hand and unsheathing her glass sword in the other. A low grumbling sound started behind her and she span apprehensively, fearing a Dwarver centurion to have been stirred by the mechanics behind the leaver. What she saw however, was something completely different.

The ground in the middle of the room retracted into the walls, and another of the long dead Dwemer's advanced creations was pushed up from bellow. Kathryn readied herself for battle, crouching into a low stance from which she could spring towards whatever threat presented itself. The intricate mass of dwarven metal was seemingly inactive, but the experienced Breton knew better than to let that fool her. Under further inspection she realised that it looked all too much like the dwarven spheres that roamed these ancient Dwemer halls, only bigger, and there was something else that set it apart from the usual dwarven guardians.

Re: A different type of Dwemer machinery. 1c / 3

[(Anonymous)]

Kathryn looked around, picked up a metal strut off the floor and hurled it towards the creation. Nothing. Any other of the old robots would have reacted to the thump on its back, and the loud, echoing clatter that followed. Kathyrn expected something to happen. But nothing did. She slowly approached the large object in the middle of the hall and as she walked around the other side, she burst out laughing! After all this caution, she realised that this was probably little more than a bit of creativity or an old play-thing. Protruding from the front of the 'thing' was a hunk of metal that looked remarkably like a penis. She thought back to the last time she had had sex with anyone - a big muscular nord in a bar about six months ago - and realised how much she craved intercourse. She made a mental note to go out, get drunk, and have sex with someone as soon as she gets back to Whiterun. Kathryn ran her hand over the metal phallus, longingly recalling her last time with the nord. It felt textured, like it had many small pores in the surface. She was sizing it up, thinking about using it as a sexual release right now when it happened..

A different type of Dwemer machinery. 2a / 3

[(Anonymous)]

Two long arms protruded from the body of the construct and grabbed onto Kathryn's arms, causing a high-pitched scream to erupt from her throat. A rod shot out from the front of the device and shoved a ball of leather into her mouth, preventing her from making any more noise, other than a loud moan. Another two limbs attached onto her legs and a further two appeared, staying still for two or three seconds - seemingly scanning her, or sizing her up - before moving towards her. They set to work, efficiently removing her nightingale armour until she was wearing only her underclothes. The arms reached around her back and undid her breast cloth, allowing it to fall to the floor and then pulled down the final piece of clothing. These two arms having accomplished their task, retracted back into the main body of the device. The four arms that had a grasp on her body lifted her into the air and gently placed her on top of the metal phallus, lowering her down onto the penis as it slid inside her. She felt a liquid being excreted, further moistening her already wet flaps - as much as she hated the situation she was in, she couldn't deny that she was aroused. She felt the cold, metal cock entering her body further and further and she managed to spit the gag from her mouth and screamed, although she wasn't sure if it was due to pleasure or the helplessness she felt and the urge to regain control of her body. But there was nothing she could do.

The dwarven penis extended out from the body of the sex machine, going further inside Kathryn until she thought she could bear no more. Then it retracted back. Forwards. Backwards. Forwards. Backwards. Each motion rewarded with a small groan from the Breton girl. She felt herself building up to her climax. Forwards. Backwards. The metal phallus slid easily through Kathryn's folds, because although it was bigger than any Nord's she had seen so far, the metal was also smoother. Forwards. Backwards. The old Dwemer machine ploughed on relentlessly. Kathryn wailed helplessly, although she knew she didn't want it to stop. As she erupted in her orgasm, she felt herself tighten around the length of metal. Her moans echoed through the old hall. The ancient dwarven cock stopped moving and she felt another liquid being excreted from the pores in its surface. This time, the substance was warming and she felt a little boost. She guessed the liquid was some kind of potion, either to heal you or make you ready for another round. Either way, she realised the old machine wasn't done quite yet.

A different type of Dwemer machinery. 2b / 3

[(Anonymous)]

The phallus started up again, plunging deep within Kathryn's womanhood then retracting back, almost leaving her. Forwards. Backwards. Forwards. Backwards. She decided she may as well enjoy this machine while she can and began bucking her hips in time with the thrusts, allowing the metal to reach more pleasurable places. She closed her eyes and bit her bottom lip as the dwarven cock pushing deep inside her. She knew that sex was unlikely to ever be as satisfying as this and there was suddenly little wonder as to why the Dwemer built this thing in the first place. It was amazing! She was perfectly in synch with the machine, rocking her hips forwards and backwards with the thrusts of the phallus, a small moan escaping her with motion. Sweat had began to appear on her naked body. She felt herself quickly building to another orgasm and threw her head back. She realised that the roof was made of the same shining metal as the doors and from this angle she could watch herself being fucked by the machine. Her perfect, round, perky breasts bounced up and down in time with the thrusts and she had to admit she was looking good. It was easy for her to find herself a partner for the night, though at this rate she doubted that she would be needing one for a long time. She was ready. With a loud moan she climaxed a second time, the Dwemer cock stopped, produced its healing potion again and then repeated its cycle.

After her fifth orgasm in a row Kathryn began to wonder how long this fucking would last. She caught a look at herself in the reflective ceiling. She was shining with sweat, her hair was a mess and she was beginning to feel tired. The feeling was still amazing but her arms and legs were beginning to ache from being suspended in the air for so long.
At her tenth orgasm, she was ready to stop. She was still enjoying herself but beginning to feel exhausted. By her fifteenth she was dreading any more and at her twentieth she was almost sobbing. She was still being fucked mercilessly and there was nothing she could do. The healing lubricant was thousands of years old and had deteriorated over time. Although replenishing, each time she felt the effects a little less. She could be here for hours before anyone came looking for her. She prayed to Talos to be released, but it was after her twenty-third screaming orgasm that her prayers were answered.

A different type of Dwemer machinery. 3a / 3

[(Anonymous)]

Aela was still waiting at the entrance of the ruins. Kathryn told her to keep watch and stop any potential threats coming down after her. That was several hours ago. This was supposed to be a simple job: get in, get the stone, get out. Two or three hours max.

Ten minutes after Kat entered the cave a small bandit party of three men turned up. Aela assumed that they had either had followed them here, or saw the smoke from the camp fire she had lit. Aela heard them coming. They were careless and talking noisily; it gave her time to duck down into the long grass and notch an arrow before they even entered the clearing. She knew that she could deal more damage with her bow if she struck before they detected her so she waited until they had passed her and had their back to her before standing up and letting her first arrow fly. It smashed through the back of the first man's head and she had a second arrow notched as he hit the floor. The second bandit received an arrow in his face as he span around to face her. Instant death. The last of the three wielded two deadly looking war axes and began jogging towards Aela. She dropped her bow to the floor and ran towards her attacker. When she was within two meters of the man, she threw herself to the floor in a roll and tugged on his feet as she passed him. The bandit collapsed to the floor before he realised what had happened. Aela unsheathed a dagger from her belt and was on top of the man before he could react, slitting is throat. Since then, she had made a meal for when Kat returned and read up a bit about Dwemer machinery. Apparently you could shut down almost anything if you shouted 'stop' in the old language. Unfortunately, she had no idea how to say it.

A different type of Dwemer machinery. 3b / 3

[(Anonymous)]

Aela was starting to worry and decided to go in after Kathryn. She had been navigating through the ruins for about thirty minutes when she heard it. The awful high-pitched scream reverberated through the halls.
"Kathryn! Kathryn I'm coming!"
Aela picked up the pace, sprinting towards the source of the noise. There was something weird about her companion's scream. It sounded almost.. Pleasurable? No, it couldn't be. Aela pushed the thought to the back of her mind and raced through the labyrinth.
"Kathryn, where are you?"
She burst around a corner and skidded to a halt, horrified by what she saw. Kathryn's limp body was suspended in the air by four arms, completely naked and with a large metal cock sliding inside her. What in tamriel was going on? Aela had seen Kathryn naked many times while changing, she was her 'follower' after all. They even slept together once to conserve heat in the wastelands near Winterhold, but nothing romantic. Although Aela had to admit, she saw the appeal and understood how she could easily bed the biggest, most handsome of men that other women would have thought out of their league. She was stunning.
"Kathryn?"
The exhausted body raised her head slowly.
"Aela..? Oh Aela! Help me out of here!"
She ran over to her and cut through the four metal arms with her blade. With nothing supporting her Kathryn slid further down the Dwemer phallus, causing another moan to escape her. Aela put her arms around her and lifted her up, off the machine and gently lowered her to the floor.
"Here, drink this. You look exhausted"
Kathryn recognised the green phial of a stamina potion and downed it. Instantly she felt her energy returning. Together, they got Kathryn dressed as she explained what had happened.
"By the nine. You must be traumatised! Promise me you'll never tell me to 'wait here' again."
"Okay, I promise"
"Good, then let's get you home"

Author's notes

[(Anonymous)]

I hope you all like my first ever fill!! I have never wrote before but I loved the prompt so much I thought I'd give it a go.
As I said, constructive criticism is welcome.
Please tell me what you did / didn't like for next time.
Thank you all for reading!

Re: Author's notes

[(Anonymous)]

It was pretty alright for it being your first fill. The "juicy" parts were a bit fast for my tastes, but y'know whatever. I didn't really enjoy Kathryn as a character, she was really flat and didn't have real distinct personality to her, the way she described herself was very arrogant, very out of place, and the fact that her many scars didn't detract from her beauty reminded me of a Mary Sue. I realize Skyrim is a bit of a rough terrain and if you can't lift up a sword, you're pretty much dead, but still a lot of scars can be distracting to a lover, or a turn on if they're into that. I realize this meant to be an erotic story, but that doesn't mean you can't have well-written plot or characters along with your smut. So you should definitely work on your characters, because I would find that more appealing. And I'm sure I am not the only person who would think so. You have a bit of an issue with grammar and such, because you didn't capitalize quite a few words, and I find that distracting because I'm writer myself. So you may want to get an editor or a beta-reader, so you can get feedback before you submit your stories. So I recommend: try to make the smutty parts longer and more detailed, work on your character's personalities, and work on your grammar. So that's about it, but overall it was pretty okay. It wasn't the greatest I've read, of course, but maybe I'll be reading more of your fills in the future. Have a nice day!

Re: Author's notes

[(Anonymous)]

A!A here.
Thanks for the advice.
I fully understand that the smut was a bit short. I read over it again fully once it was posted and realised this myself. It seemed longer when I was writing it :/ I shall work on this for next time.
The characters personalities: Yeah, I see where you're coming from. Re-reading it with your comment in mind I can see that I didn't even mention her personality. Oops.. What is a 'Mary Sue'? I looked it up and from what I understand it is a character that is too perfect? Is that what you meant?
Finally, the grammar. I missed tha capital N in Nord and I wasn't sure if dwarven had a capital 'D'? Is that it or is there more that I didn't realise..
Thanks again for helping me along here. Hopefully my writing will improve into more enjoyable stories for you guys :)

Re: Author's notes

[(Anonymous)]

I enjoyed the fill, but as you asked for constructive criticism I will offer some.

I would like to echo the other Anon's suggestion that you invest more in your character's personality.

In this fic Kathryn did pretty much what any player character does, but you didn't really give us what she was thinking, or her sense of humour or honour or what she was feeling. I get that the fill is a) a one-shot and b) your first, so I'm recommending this as something to bear in mind for future fics. Because I don't know what's going through her mind bar the basics I find it hard to figure out how to relate or empathise or engage with her emotionally as a reader, if that makes sense.

As for the smut I really can't offer any advice other than to lose any inhibitions you may have, and let it last as long as you like (no pun intended). Smut is the part of writing I have the most trouble with (seriously, I go red as a beetroot once my DB starts taking of her armour).
Kathryn does jump from orgasm 1 to orgasm 5 to 10 a bit quicker than I'd have expected, (and I kind of hoped there would be more of her discomfort or being wrung out), but then the Dwemer were freakin' geniuses when it came to technology, so it's forgivable :P

Aela seemed to have been better fleshed out than Kathryn, which is both a positive and a negative, as I would rather know about your DB more than her companion (especially as we see more of K than A), but it's good to see their history and rapport together. You did that very well, IMO.

The part about yelling "stop in the old language" was quite the tease, but because it was irrelevant to the action (Aela just using her sword to cut Kathryn loose) made it stick out like a sore thumb. I don't think it's necessary, unless Kathryn's going to take up lessons in the Dwemer tongue, if you know what I mean :)

I really did enjoy the fic, and I hope you gain lots of confidence to continue working on fills, with Kathryn or other DB characters, as you get better and better :)

Re: Author's notes

[(Anonymous)]

Hey, thanks for the advice.

I was planning on having Aela use that to stop the machine but couldn't find the actual word for stop anywhere and didn't want to get it wrong or make it up to have someone come and correct me so I thought I would just leave it in there.. :L
I understand that I didn't really mention Kat's character and I'll be sure to work on that for next time

I agree about the smut. It's hard to write and I therefore had trouble making it last very long, but I also found it a lot of fun!

Thanks for all the complements mixed in as well! The first reply didn't and it kind of knocked my confidence and made me not want to write anymore but your post has made me feel much better, so thanks! I'll look for another prompt to practice on :)

Anon again

[(Anonymous)]

I really did like your fic Anon, and I hope you do continue writing. Like anything else, writing only improves with practice and repetition. Keep it up and you'll be a great writer - you've got potential, you just need to work on it.

Finding a beta reader might be a good idea, that way you'll get feedback and advice on grammar, spelling generally, and if the reader is within the fandom they'll be able to offer advice on keeping things in-character. It always pays to have another person cast their eye over something, just for tweaking and finishing touches, anyway. (Although I'm one to talk, never use one myself^^)

I get where you're coming from with leaving the Dwemer instruction in - I've done the same with my fics, realising after I've posted that some bits didn't need to be in there. I usually edit it when I'm reposting de-anon on my fic journal.

The best thing about smut is that everyone's tastes are different, and if you write what you find sexy, you'll find plenty of people who find the same thing sexy, too - but getting past the inhibitions can be tricky. Again, the more you do it the easier it gets :D

I really hope you write more fics with Kathryn, maybe just write a little character piece (for yourself) so you know what she's like, and if you're writing another fic with her you'll know how she'd think/act/react in whatever situation she's in.

Re: Author's notes

[(Anonymous)]

Hey A!A,

Don't you worry I liked your first fill too! I'm sure we all remember our very first fill, our very first smut and it's hard! I think you did a good job on your first and you got some good comments to work with on improving and I really hope you do continue writing. I hate critisizing to be honest, cause I always feel kinda mean and I don't find my own writing all that great so who am I to critisize another's work... but I know how valuable it can be so I'll try giving you something to work with :)

Try to be a part of your story, live it as you write it. It'll make it easier to give more detail and draw things out. Let go of whatever inhibitions you may have and write that smut. Try going into detail, what do they do and feel, the sounds they make. In the case of your fill you could for example have explained more the things the DB felt, did the dwemer-phallus hit the right spot? How deep did it go? Did it alternate speeds? And how did the DB feel throughout this? What where her thoughts? Those are things readers (or at least me) like to read about, it gives the story more depth.

Character development is difficult in a oneshot but you can use little things as thoughts or remarks. They can project the image that your character is for example humorous, snarky, kind or evil. I liked how you put in a little memory of her last time having sex, it gives her a little more background, they help in developing your character.

Personally I would take the comments you've been given and expand on this story, make it better. I think that's the easiest way to learn a bit more before moving on to your next. But it's all up to you of course :) I wish you all the best in your writing endeavours, and please don't stop writing!

Re: Author's notes

[(Anonymous)]

Thanks for the advice! I'll try to consider these things the next time I write. Your suggestion and tips seem like they could make fleshing out both the personality and the smut a lot easier.

I may try using these comment to improve this fill like you said, it seems like a good idea to me :) If so, should I re-post them here, or as a new thing altogether?

Re: Author's notes

[(Anonymous)]

I'm glad you think you can work with it, hopefully we'll see you grow :) That's the beauty of a place like this, you can practice and if asked people will tell you what they think and help you along :)

If you're going to repost I think, since it's technically still a fill for this prompt you should do it here and add something to the title like - redone - or something along those lines so that we know it's from the same author and not someone trying to steal your work :)

Unless you end up rewriting it so that it no longer fills the prompt, then it's best posted as an entirely new story :)

Goodluck!

Re: Author's notes

[(Anonymous)]

Okay, thanks for the advice. I've got a big exam coming up and will be revising for that but once it's over I will probably try again. Thanks again. A!A

Re: Author's notes

[(Anonymous)]

Also, thanks for being kind! It's a real confidence boost and it's people like you that make me want to try again!! :D

Re: Author's notes

[(Anonymous)]

You're most welcome A!A! I'm so glad you still want to continue writing, nobody should be discouraged to do something they enjoy. I for one look forward to your next work!